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Great on Detail. Plot is OK Nov 20, 2009
By George D. Klein, author, Dissensions As a geologist who published a novel five years ago, I waited with great anticipation to see how Althaus's "Francis Smith, Oil Finder" would turn out. I also wanted to see if Althaus had learned the things I learned when writing mine by participating in a local "Writer's Guild" once per week to learn how to write a novel.
This book is very good on detail. The detailed technical descriptions of intepreting well logs, seismic data, oil field operations, and drilling are excellent. His discussion of the landscape around New Orleans, the Missisippi Delta and the Gulf COast is excellent too. Overall, the book is well written.
The plot is OK. It deals with how he was able to spring audits of some of his employer's managers who clearly were on the take and get them removed from the company. At the same time, he meets the girl of his dreams and finally they agree to marry. Those are the good bits.
The novel is flawed by too much detail, and not introducing the reader to the conflict that is central to the novel until page 52 and page 57. I was told at my writer's guild meetings that if one didn't introduce the element of conflict in a novel before the tenth page, the novel would not retain reader attention. That could be a problem for readers of this book.
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