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4 of 5 found the following review helpful:
 Wow! Oct 28, 2003
By Holly Wade
My Master is a tale of absolute submission and total erotica. Jessica is tricked into the experience of complete erotic submission to The Master, on his island of delights. A little romantic, mostly vicarious submission, this is a tale of sexual awakening and response that will make you look forward to Justus Roux next chapter.
1 of 1 found the following review helpful:
 Spellcheck Please? Aug 12, 2011
By Renee Swain
I read perhaps three pages before I got annoyed at this author's inability to spell correctly. Don't waste your money. If you're looking for good erotic fiction, aim for Club Shadowlands [Masters of the Shadowlands 1]
1 of 1 found the following review helpful:
Guest vs. Guests Oct 05, 2010
By beachbaby
After reading all of the posted reviews I decided to go ahead and purchase this book along with another book from the same author. Previous reviewers mentioned grammatical errors but I thought I would be able to overlook them. I was wrong. Note to author, editor and proof reader - when you use the word "guest" that implies one person and if you are speaking about two or more the word "guests" is used. The "s" at the end of the word guests implies a plural (more than one guest). Hopefully that is enough said about that. The dialogue was quite basic and not much detail. Another reviewer mentioned the synopsis on the back of the book, I totally agree that it felt as if someone other than the author wrote it as it was quite good. The book felt choppy from one chapter to the next. A big disappoint especially given the price.
1 of 1 found the following review helpful:
Author needs a Master of the English language Jun 03, 2009
By Berta B
"Avid Reader of Erotic Fiction"
I am with the other reviewer. The synopse on the back of the book was better written than the ENTIRE book. If I could have given it zero stars I would have.
The book had a plot that while albeitly far-fetched, caught my attention and sounded interesting to me as a reader of erotic fiction and especially BDSM fiction.
Sadly, the utter lack of editing, poor language choice and spelling and grammatical errors made this book a nightmare to read.
How many times can a person use the word "Ummmm" to express sexual pleasure. It made me nauseous.
It was so bad, I couldnt get past the errors to lose myself in the story and I am really unsure how anyone else could, unless this is the state to which our english language has deteriorated.
I seriously debated writing to the publishing company and offering my services as an editor, thats how distracting the grammatical errors and poor writing were.
I will NOT be buying another book by this author.
2 of 3 found the following review helpful:
Hot!! Jan 31, 2004
This book was sizzling. Jessica the main character was trick to go on the erotic island paradise by her husband. The Master of the island awakens her deepest sexual fantasies but ends up falling in love with her. This book was romantic and very hot.
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