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2 of 2 found the following review helpful:
 UGH! Jun 23, 2005
By NY Editor
"Trey Breavous"
What was this person thinking? Do they really feel they can write? My God! How do I get my money back. The pages are filled with sentence over runs - sentences that make no sense what so ever - and grade school level paragraph building. This book is dry and boring. If your a mystery fan, your money will be wasted on this book. I would recommend this author take some basic mystery writing courses at a local community college and then stick to writing for the school paper.
1 of 1 found the following review helpful:
Bummer Aug 24, 2005
By Lori
I was excited to finally see a conspiracy theory type novel with a lesbian slant. Hoever, I am more than disappointed to find the main character almost ashamed of her sexuality. It was very difficult to read this, sentence over-runs and useless descriptors. Completely nonsensical writing. There is such a thing as too many words. This would have been a much better story if the the author used concise writing abilities and allowed her character to accept herself even if she didn't know who she is. My recommendation for the author would be "don't quit your day job".
0 of 2 found the following review helpful:
 The Empty Cocoon May 10, 2004
Quick reading. Pay attention because clues are stashed through-out. I enjoyed the characters and the plot. I'm looking forward to the next book.
0 of 2 found the following review helpful:
A reader from Lake Tahoe Feb 18, 2004
If you like a good PI mystery (female heroine)and a fast paced book, this is it! The story has numerous issues (chemtrails, New World Order, FBI, etc.) all innerconnecting in a surprize ending - actually, there are are a few surprizes, as well as a boatload of grins.
Be sure to pay attention to all the details, you'll need them to figure out who the "bad-guys" really are.
Enjoy.
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